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napowrimo #13

April 13, 2010

Unlucky #13? We’ll see. My NaPoWriMo draft 13 is for the Poetic Asides prompt: “Write a love poem. Write an anti-love poem.” (The blog provides two prompts on Tuesdays, and writers can pick one or combine them. This *might* combine them, if it’s even possible to do.)

..DRAFT /

REMOVED BY THE AUTHOR FOR REVISION.

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Tally: 15 = 6.5 RWP + 7.5 PAD + 1 Book of Kells. (Target is now 32.)

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4 Comments
  1. April 13, 2010 11:09 am

    Nice images, Carolee, particularly about the gas jar.

  2. J. D. Mackenzie permalink
    April 13, 2010 4:26 pm

    Honesty, probability, gaming. This was a tight tour of some of the aspects of love and other proxies. I liked it a lot!
    JDM

  3. April 13, 2010 7:07 pm

    Carolee,
    This is fantastic! I love the first three stanzas!
    Pamela

  4. April 13, 2010 7:09 pm

    Disproving probability by becoming the everywhere singularity is wonderful. Snuffing out one flame to know another will be lit is a great ending.

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