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a river of stones, stone #2

January 2, 2011
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13 Comments
  1. January 2, 2011 10:45 am

    Wonderful!

  2. January 2, 2011 11:26 am

    I love the idea of sleeping room to room. And the bravery required to rearrange the stars? Immense!

  3. January 2, 2011 11:33 am

    Sounds like a chapbook in the making. Again, I love your stone. Am picking them up and putting them in my pocket.
    m

    • January 2, 2011 1:24 pm

      thanks, margo! i dont know about a chapbook. it’s a little early for that. 🙂 though i did this (sort of) on my own in june and was able to see themes emerging and trails to follow. perhaps that same thing is happening now.

  4. January 2, 2011 11:39 am

    I have, I have…lol, love this one,

    Elizabeth

  5. January 2, 2011 12:23 pm

    Been known to do that. Perceptive little piece.

  6. January 2, 2011 7:06 pm

    I like how you’re continuing your thoughts from one stone to the next. In the end you’ll have a memoir in poetry for the month of January. Nice poems, carolee. 🙂

    • January 2, 2011 7:16 pm

      thanks, christine! we’ll see if it continues or not. taking them as they come. 🙂

  7. January 3, 2011 10:53 am

    I like the way this poem captures the conflicting sense of aspiration, opportunity and unsettledness that comes with every new year. I hope you find your own room – but not before having lots of fun with the stars!

    Thanks

    Matthew

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