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a river of stones, stone #28

January 31, 2011
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REMOVED FOR EDITING.

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for a river of stones.

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This is my final stone for the month (since it’s the last day of January, even though I missed the last couple of days). Visit the comments section here to see the other January 31 stones.

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11 Comments
  1. January 31, 2011 10:50 am

    I shall miss my daily visit with you. Good luck, take care and I hope our paths continue to cross here and there.
    margo

  2. January 31, 2011 12:14 pm

    (o)

  3. January 31, 2011 2:54 pm

    i relish the notion of planting our fragments … a lot

    customarily i would never be forward enough to suggest an edit (especially by way of an introduction) but, might i ask that you drop the final ‘a’ preceding flower (for effect) ? … i’d love this beautiful little stone even more that way …

    hello, Carolee, i’m noxy.

    • January 31, 2011 3:09 pm

      hi, noxy! nice to meet you. 🙂

      i always talk about process on my blog and love when people make suggestions. since they are first drafts, i am playing with them and poking at them and enjoy being able to consider many ideas.

      in this case, i already know i want to use flower as a noun and so i need that “a,” but you’re right, deleting it would work in another way.

      thanks!

      • January 31, 2011 3:23 pm

        ah, now i see it is (or can be) circular as a marble … thus, requiring a noun …

  4. January 31, 2011 3:13 pm

    You’ve sprouted a beautiful month of stones. xoxox

  5. February 1, 2011 12:07 am

    That’s a lovely line to end the collection with – especially knowing that you are in the middle of winter there – I hope you have many flowers in your garden soon.

  6. February 1, 2011 5:18 pm

    I love this, Carolee. I plan to plant potsherds in my side garden, maybe they will grow plates covered with painted flowers.

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