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poem-a-day, november 6

November 6, 2011

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november 6
write an addict poem

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6 Comments
  1. November 6, 2011 6:25 pm

    Some real stuff here (intense in feeling, and very vulnerable but open-sounding). Wow.

    • November 7, 2011 11:12 am

      hi, hannah! thank you so much. it is hard to write when the emotions are raw. for me, anyway.

  2. November 7, 2011 10:20 am

    this is such a vivid snapshot. and i love the language.

  3. redmitten permalink
    November 7, 2011 11:10 am

    am drawn to the flat delivery, the space left between the he said she said really works in this piece. solid stuff you are doing here (thought i’d let you know i’m following along, inspired.)

    sherry o’keefe

    • November 7, 2011 11:37 am

      hi, sherry. thanks for your comment and thanks for reading! and i am pleased the delivery comes off flat here. thrilled, actually. i took one or two tiny kernels of real life and created a fictional encounter. i have been seething a lot in the last couple months, and am thrilled it comes off like it’s somewhat under control. 🙂

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