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January 24, 2012
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  1. kath permalink
    January 24, 2012 11:40 pm

    Really great imagery and comparisons…the end left me chilled, no pun intended. So familiar with icy jarring sharp edged words…no mittens or scarves to warm me. Really really like this one!

  2. January 25, 2012 12:16 am

    I love this post. Brilliant writing 🙂

  3. January 25, 2012 9:28 am

    wow. this is gorgeous. “a poem. or something like it.” i’ll say!

  4. January 25, 2012 1:26 pm

    Wow. That image of the Hudson hardening and night and letting go… always in flux. Yeah, that’s going to stick with me for a while.

  5. January 25, 2012 4:07 pm

    People rarely (and much more rarely so beautifully) think of ice vs. water as a process rather than just two possible states. Powerful currents (pun slightly intended) going on here; love also how the colors just burst out in the last stanza after all the chilly ones.

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